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Age/Gender: 32, Male
Location: León (Spain)
Job: DVD-Store clerk
My most popular pic so far has been the drunken fairy. One day, that pixy came mad at me, all day flying around me tingling and sparkling fairy dust everywhere... Now, she just sits there all grumpy. She realized that I just kept looking under her dress.
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That idea of matching text with rythm is really good, but It´d be better if some more elements and colors were shown progressively, just like the DF songs... You start with simple fonts and effects, plain black background and you should have your flick growing with more rythmic text, colors, effects... until ending up in a mindblowing audiovisual pandemonium... That would be the right approach.
But the dancing robot was awesome. And, well, it was for class, so it´s right... I know that if you try again, it´ll be harder, BETTER, FASTER, STRONGER.
Author's Response:
Thanks i know there was sinilar animations just tryin to get the viewer to assosiate the actions with the words. I had to have it finished by the 5th of may thats y its kinda shortened at the end. But thanks for the comment i know more elements are needed im just glas people like it for my first one!
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I´d also like to make a flash with the kite flight theme one day...
There´s some bits of that peaceful, dreamy feeling in this movie, so, although it´s far from perfection, I can tell that you´re on the right lane to succeed in a future revision...
By the way, I´ve just watched the flick again and turn the volume louder just to make sure that there was no sound at all...
... Because I could tell I could hear the wind blowing.
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Really funny gadget... The Easter Egg is really worthwhile!
Maybe the girl should be drawn with a less regular line, it´d be nicer looking.
Good job. (KA-BOOOM!)
Author's Response:
Thanks!! yeah it ended up looking quite artificial, I smoothed the lines a lot but in the begining the lines were really shaky, my hand was like trembling or something!
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Its gameplay is so console-like... I wish I had a joypad to play this with.
The main character has all sorts of actions, cutscenes... There´s a big, GREAT adventure in here. I have to admit this is a first impression... But I´m gonna bookmark this and play it completely. And there´s not many flash games that impel me to do that.
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But the filesize is too big for this. compress the sound or else you´ll be in trouble when making a longer flick... I´d suggest you to look at "M is bad!". It has an epic length...
Author's Response:
Yeah, I know the file size is big, but it's problary because I didn't know how to do motion tweens when I made this flash, so like all frames in the mario and kirby layers are keyframes.
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"This is what I call a proper parody."
The speech is really funny and really appropiate. It remembers me a bit of that "Family Guy" off-topic gags... It could really appear in an episode.
It sounds so real-life-like...
I think I´m gonna remember this each time I cross the finish line... I´m sure.
Author's Response:
It was unintentional but while I was making it I realised it was quite Family Guy-esque as well. Thanks for the review. :)
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Yeah, I know it was only a game... OR WASN´T IT? Oooh, that windows and sound alerts really startled me...
The bug mashing brought me fond memories of "Gnat Attack" from the SNES "Mario Paint"... but tha´ friggin´ roach didn´t want to die!
Some more tests would make a golden title. Think about a sequel.
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Very funny, and well executed. You´ve really taken much effort into this movie.
P.S.: That walk cycle of the girl... Huh,huuh... We´ve been browsing some Preston Blair manuals lately, haven´t we? ;D
Author's Response:
lol, not Preston Blair, its moves in an animation red hot hiding hood.:)
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Love your way of drawing kids (but was it Kevin or Kalvin?), and you´ve managed to make me smile again with old, worn-out jokes. The credits menu is lovable and the storyboard extra is slick. Congrats to the voice actors.
I´d really love if these two kids would appear again in the Newgrounds. Keep flashin´us!!!
Author's Response:
Technically it is a series. Venture into the past, if you dare.
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You see what you´ve done? You´ve moved me with a South Park-style video with an AOR song... Damn you forever, because that doesn´t sound like myself at all...
This is perfectly executed, up to the slightest detail (The Replay button is charming). Beware with the blurred clouds, it can lag like hell in some computers.
Finally, the change of the looks of the two main characters is a great idea that shows very well the passing of time, but...
Did you notice that YOU HAVEN´T CHANGED CLOTHES FOR THE LAST THREE YEARS?!
(Anyway, congratulations. I envy you for having such a good relationship. ;D)
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