Score: 8

"Yeah! Love your Mum, too!"

submission: Sleep Time

date: March 17, 2008

Funny as hell, dude! Loved it ´till the very last second.
This should be frontpaged on Mother´s Day.
BTW... Is there not a Mum collection?

Score: 5

"Time to make a summary..."

submission: Tink's Big Adventure #6

date: March 14, 2008

Well, glad to hear that you´re actually working in the follow-up to this chapter.
In this chapter there´s a scene that could have been animated. I assume you´re planning to actually make some animated panels in the future chapters. That would be a really nice feature to add to this series, no matter if they´re simple, after all, this is a sort of online comic. Music would be an easy feature to add, if you find an appropiate tune (Remember to add an "stopallsounds" button if you do so.). Sound effects would be also nice... if you´re able to find really good ones, so, better to forget about them for the moment.
About future storylines... Remember that the Tink we all know and love will have eventually to go back to her former self. It´s okay to make changes in the character, but you´ll have to have something prepared to return her to her status quo when the time comes.
I suggest you to check the "Disney´s Fairies" comic series, you´ll find lots of interesting new characters that you can use to spice up your series.
As for the Art, just keep on practising. You´re taking a lot of effort, so you´ll improve with time. But try to get your hands in some sort of character sheet or similar. Try to study on the Disney style of comic and animation. I´m sure we´ll see a quick improvement if you do so.
Finally, I´d like to congratulate you for you mature, rational attitude. There has been some harsh and unfair reviews, but you´ve stayed cool.
To all of them: What was of the "Everything, by Everyone?"
As another reviewee stated: "Whatever rocks your boat".
Hope to see the next chapter soon.

P.D: Maybe you find strange something that I said in my first two reviews.
Have you checked my profile? Then, you will understand.

Score: 5

"Something curious about this series..."

submission: Tink's Big Adventure #5

date: March 14, 2008

Captain Hook doesn´t look too similar to Disney´s... I find this quite strange.
Nothing new apart from what I already said in previous reviews.
On to the sixth.

Score: 5

"Pixie Punish."

submission: Tink's Big Adventure #4

date: March 13, 2008

Well, not bad for the moment.
It´s nice seeing that you´re managing to vary the content in each chapter.
I assume we´ll be uploading the two final episodes tomorrow, then?

Score: 5

"And now, with dialogues!"

submission: Tink's Big Adventure #3

date: March 13, 2008

It had to happen sooner or later...
Nice idea the on/off text button, the text wasn´t really annoying this time, though.
It´s nice to hear from you that, not only you´re planning to extend the series, but you´re also thinking of making a little game with it. I´ll be looking forward to it.

Score: 9

"HAAAHA HA....!!!"

submission: Melons

date: March 12, 2008

Brilliant loop, honestly.
Beware of that annoying watermelon seeds!
The Avant-garde of midget hentai is here.
Don´t forget to show this advertisement to all your friends and family, it is of the utmost importance.
BEFORE EATING MELONS, PUT OUT THE SEEDS FIRST, OR ELSE HILARITY WILL ENSUE.

Score: 8

"Highly interesting and truely unique."

submission: Master Music Class 1

date: March 12, 2008

I´m going to have an eye on this tutorial. You´ve had a lot of interesting ideas for interactivity with the user.
It really shows your will to actually teach something about music...
Excellent work.

Score: 5

"Now with cosplay!"

submission: Tink's Big Adventure #2

date: March 12, 2008

I assume you´ve got all the six chapters already made, so I don´t think suggesting anything won´t be of any use... But I hope you make Tink undergo to all sorts of pervertions, it´s fun.
... and, if it doesn´t made myself clear the first time....
I DON´T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH THIS SERIES, I SWEAR TO GOD!!!

Score: 5

"I swear I´ve got nothing to do with this."

submission: Tink's Big Adventure #1

date: March 12, 2008

Honestly!
Nice idea, but it could use some animation and sound.
Anyway, you have put some effort in the pics.
I´m going to watch the whole series.

Score: 6

"Not again..."

submission: Death Goddess Dressup

date: February 25, 2008

This is a message to all dress-up makers:
Please, DON´T USE BITMAP.
The pictures are really nice and cute as hell, but they all look jaggy because they´re not redered with vectors. And, if you want to take off the shirt, you have to take the arms´ garments first, because they´re a square transparent GIF.
I really encourage you to learn how to draw in a vector program (Flash is quite tricky when drawing) and make another one. You can make an excellent game. This is a main flaw in a dress-up, trust me.