Score: 8

"Actionloop without shit."

submission: Marble Lines

date: February 14, 2008

Yeah, maybe some images or something would spice it a bit, but since Mitchell corp lauched the original arcade version of this game, there has been a lot of clones and... Maybe this one has the only feature we really needed: To be really well done. Excellent coding, working fast and smoothly. And the layout is well presented, too, with a nice use of gradients.

So, when you see further clones of this game, demand no less than this.

Score: 8

"Really witty game."

submission: Ogotu

date: February 11, 2008

It has been a real pleasure to find a game like this not being produced or sponsored by another page trying to leech from the newgrounds... Well done!
Excellent coding, with nice visual effects. Congrats to the musician too, it´s a jolly tune.
Overall, a highly enjoyable (and fairly original, too.) puzzle game. Recommended.

Score: 6

"Fuck off, She´s Wanda..."

submission: Animation 3 Final Project

date: February 5, 2008

Hahaha... Anyway is fun, and the animation is neat.
But I´d dare to say that, more than "be inspirated" you almost raped the Fairly Godparents character designs...
But I´d like to see another animation in this style. You did well, and it´d be interesting to see what could you do with a longer script.

Score: 8

"Ahh, really good X-rated movie..."

submission: PT4: When Bitches Botch

date: January 24, 2008

Yes, sir. It was worth the wait. It´s good to have you making this movies, ´cause I feel an overall lack of fresh quality entries when it comes to mature, sex-oriented flash in the Mature section.
There´s some room for improvement, though. The quality of both animation and lineart is irregular, with some parts much better than others. Like if you were pushing yourself too hard to get an ultra-epic sex film done, here and now. Anyway, I think your intention was to show all the tricks you´ve learned in previous chapters here...
Take it easier next time, with a more quiet, less frantic storyline. Something with a slower pace. Think about making a story like that in the future.
...And that Lyon character is really somebody I´d like to see again in your movies... But those sunglasses... I think they´re the same worn by a guy who came out of a penis and was fond of soccer girls... Very suspicious... ;D
Nice work, dude. Keep on it.

Score: 9

"If you´ve been a student, this´ll catch your heart"

submission: End of the Row

date: January 24, 2008

NOTE: The first I loaded this, the PLAY button didn´t appear. If this happens to somebody else, reload it again, it is worthwhile.
Whoa... that´s what I call a brilliant movie. You really get to cram here all the student life atmosphere, the procrastination, that bitter feeling of attending an exam you are not ready for...
Maybe the drawing style is not much appealing at first, with that shaky lineart, but is really well animated, and the most important thing is that you have TOP-NOTCH storytelling skills. The pace of the story is just perfect.
This is one of the best movies I´ve seen in the last months. Congratulations, and hope to the next soon.
One last thing: Frontpage NOW.

Score: 6

"Hey man, save this for Mother´s Day..."

submission: Respect your mother

date: January 22, 2008

I hope this gets frontpaged then...
Ok, now the real comments... I don´t think people would flame this for the muslim imagery... They´ll blam it for excess of sugar and sweetness in levels hazardous for health. Man, this is not suitable for diabethic people... I found it charming and annoying at the same time.
You´ve also incurred in overuse of symbols. And there´s a style mismatch between them (Cute chibi girls with natural, lifelike people?.). That doesn´t look too good... The text at the beginning is hard to read, also.
I hope you work on all this in your next flash. ´Cause, you know, I enjoyed this one anyway. It´s soooo crazy and strange that, if you have a little taste for the oddities (Well, look at my username.) you are obliged to.
Hope to watch another soon.

Score: 7

"I like this series..."

submission: Perverted Tales IV Teaser

date: January 15, 2008

But this is REALLY graphic intensive... It would be advisable to take care of that in the future because I´m sure there has to be a way of getting it to run smoother. This is not a small problem. Please share your experience about this issue.
Changing subjects, it appears that this chapter is going to involve heavy storytelling... I can´t help thinking you´re going to deliver us a full-length movie or at least a 2-part special... Looks really ambitious.
I´m really looking forward to see the final cut. Way to go, bro.
One last question... What´s the name of the movie? "When Bitches Bitch"?, "Botch"?, "Bctch"? Can´t really read the logo very well...

Score: 5

"True, true."

submission: Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 144

date: January 6, 2008

It´s hard to catch an Articuno. Adolf is going to have a hard time getting the legendary pokémon.
This is a highlight in the series.

Score: 6

"Still, it´s quite good..."

submission: Hotride - The Prodigy

date: January 6, 2008

The artwork is quite naïve, but suggestive, anyway. You really tried to get the most of each symbol... A bit monotonous but efficient.
Good work with the pace of the animation. I´m sure you´ll make very interesting movies very soon. Keep on that.

Score: 8

"Cute as Hell."

submission: Love Chase

date: January 4, 2008

I just dig on that p-puffed bodies... There is a lot of effort put in the animation and choreography, and the transitions and the effects are neat. It gives that snappy feeling.
A cleaner line would have suited better the style (although, it would´ve taken AGES to animate FBF doing that.). The white pupils with thin black outline doesn´t seem right to me either... The more color, the merrier and you wouldn´t have to use outline that way.
Make another anyway! ...and I like to suggest you, as an style exercise, to swap the black outlines in the figures by colored ones. I´ve been trying that lately, and it really suited your style. You got the simple lines, now make it colorful.
Really good work. Congratulations.