Score: 6

"You´re still green, but..."

submission: TM

date: November 27, 2007

... You really took a lot of effort in this flash. Well done. You still have a lot to learn, though. Try to improve one thing at a time, like your drawing style, or a slightly complex story. Take it as an objective for your next movie.
You made a nice use of visual effects and blurs. Congratulations in that.
If this your first movie in the site, it´s a really nice debut. Go on and make something even better for the next time!
I´m sure you will make it.

Score: 8

"Cool Artwork!!!"

submission: Rocket Crotch!!

date: November 24, 2007

That 3 month work has really paid off well. Good selection of music and enjoyable random action. I really love that wacky characters you draw. Hope to see more of you soon.

Score: 9

"Aaand another Dinner Dash clone..."

submission: Burger Restaurant

date: November 14, 2007

Although I liked it more than the one from yesterday (Jane´s Hotel). You really tried to give it the Arcade-like feeling that Jane´s Hotel lacked of. This one also seems to be more honest. I hope you don´t answer me with that bullshit of "No, this isn´t a Dinner Dash-like game, it has its own unique gameplay." Yeah, right.

Loved the graphics and the sounds (I think that beep is from Sonic´s games... Is it the same?). I found the pace a little bit too slow in my first try, but lowering the quality to normal improves the speed to an enjoyable pace. Oh, has this game an auto-save feature? (when I launched the game again, my unlocked stages were still there...).

You should have mentioned the silver plates thing in the instructions. (I really missed the feature of using both hands like DD, but when I found out this, it became a nice substitute of that feature. Good idea.).

It´s going to be a hard time making a sequel of this game, because it´s very well made now. I´ll PM you if I come up with something. The only thing that I can think now is to work on a little bit faster engine.

Anyway... Congratulations, man!!!

Score: 7

"Well done, but it´s a Dinner Dash Rip-off..."

submission: Jane's Hotel

date: November 12, 2007

I haven´t found any major flaws yet. The coding is just perfect, so you deserve a high rank for this. But the game is way too similar to its model... Maybe you should have tried to give it a radical look or throw up more significant changes... The final aspect of the game is rather bland and unpersonal, like something that you´ve been commisioned to.
I mean, it´s okay to mimic Dinner Dash, but if you do it, make a honest game... Something that tell us: "This is my version of Dinner Dash." not "This is my rip-off of Dinner Dash."
I could continue droning, but I don´t really know if I could get me understood...
Anyway, good game, but a missed oportunity for making a brilliant DD clone.

Score: 7

"The Animated Soap-Opera!!!"

submission: Troubled love

date: November 6, 2007

It´s more fun when the characters are cartoons. I´d really love to see a series of this kind in Newgrounds... Why don´t you try to make an animation bank and make a weekly series?

Score: 7

"This guy is opening his heart to us..."

submission: 777 - Part 6

date: November 6, 2007

I mean, you´re really make the kind of animation that you really enjoy and love... I find that quite touching...
When I first saw the heroine in the previous chapter I couldn´t help to think she was the spitting image of certain videogame princess... And then in this chapter, we see that castle... Is she coming back home? I´ll have to watch the first four installments of the series...

Oh, nice work. I almost forgot. Nice music and good character drawings.

(Just one last thing. When I saw the robot scene, it remembered me of the Megaman Zero´s giant boss battles... How would I liked it had been a game and take control of 777 in that moment... Funny, don´t you think so?)

Score: 5

"I think the comment translates as..."

submission: meleka

date: November 6, 2007

"Well, this animation is just a shit."

Am I right? Any portuguese speaker can help me with this? (I´m spanish, I´m just curious.)

Well, I think this commentary was relevant, that´s why I have remarked it.
Anyway, It´s fun. Not more, not less. Obrigado.

Score: 5

"nice loop but..."

submission: Catsmastic

date: November 6, 2007

... there´s a little bit of silence between the end and the beginning of the loop. I HATE THAT! And it´s the same with almost every loop I see nowadays!
To all loop animators: The least you could do is to make sure the ending fits perfectly with the beginning. If it doesn´t, the it´s not a loop, it´s only an animation that repeats itself endlessly.
Ah, by the way, nice tune. And putting a Zekey´s pic is a win.

Score: 3

"Is it really working properly?"

submission: Doctor Diagnosis

date: November 6, 2007

I can´t get past the third patient. One option gets you to the congratulation page of the previous patient and the other one leads you to game over.
Anyway, its a good idea, but it needs lots of improvement. Find some sound files to spice up the action. Then, find an artist to make you some images. And if you can´t find an artist, make a better photo selection, because it´s very strage to treat a female patient and see a pic of a female doctor teating a male patient.
These are the improvements you could make without using AS. But I think that if you have made the game like this, it´s because you don´t know about variables and that sort of things... If you want to dwell in such matters, search for help on how to randomize situations.
I hope to see an improved version of this, keep working on it.

Score: 7

"Bringing out the best of each Kb."

submission: FlashZoids

date: November 5, 2007

It´s really well done. Good presentation and very, very playable. And all in such a ridiculous file size! I´m going to put an eye on you...