Score: 6

"The germ of an interesting idea"

submission: The Journey of Identity

date: October 23, 2007

This is the most remarkable feature of your movie. I really suggest you to keep working on flash and try the same idea again, when you have more experience and you can develop your quest for self-knowledge ideas better. I´ll be looking forward to it.

Score: 6

"Yeah, a pair of Dik´eds."

submission: Dik'eds ep. 1: "Cat nip"

date: October 11, 2007

Hey, it´s fairly fun. Just go on with it. You will improve eventually, so there´s really nothing to point right now in this stage.
...And the song totally ROCKS. I really enjoyed the opening & ending header.

Score: 5

"It´s cute, but yes, it needs improvement."

submission: Magi-Doll creator

date: October 10, 2007

The girl design is nice, but the resolution makes pictures look jaggy. It´s a pity. Did you use bitmap?. Not a good choice... Vector will look better and will allow you to make transparent dresses, they´d look really nice.
The music is really nice, good choice here.
Not much variety in the clothes... The same design repeated with different colors...
Turn the hair into a movie clip and change it with a button. The shape of the skull is ankward. If you don´t really want to put sexual features in your doll (You know, nipples and other girl-thingies.), do the same with the underwear. This will avoid strange-looking weirdos and save you space for more clothes.
I´m also working in a dress-up, too (but with nudity), so I know the troubles you may find. Fix it and you will get something really good.

Score: 7

"Simple, yet funny..."

submission: Dotdesign

date: October 10, 2007

Aaaah... You brought me fond memories of the "Character Designer" that came with my Amstrad CPC demo cassette... People, just try it for a while. You could be amazed of what you can get.

Oh, I really liked the just-clicking interface idea for choosing colors... but it can be a pain for filling large areas. Oh, well. No pain, no gain.

Score: 8

"Outstanding visuals."

submission: One Story to the Next

date: October 10, 2007

And funny plot, also.
I can´t help thinking I´m seeing a cartoon featuring Gumby and Pacman´s red ghost... Did you guys also feel the same?

Score: 5

"You know, I used to blam this series..."

submission: Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 053

date: October 7, 2007

But the other day, a picture of Hitler was being shown on TV, and I couldn´t help to imagine him evolving into a Pokémon...
So I´m following this now. Just for principles. I hope the last one has a thrilling seizure-inducing ending...

Score: 9

"Really good."

submission: A Canvas And A Struggle

date: October 5, 2007

Way to go man. The footage lasts exactly the time needed to tell the story, no more, no less. It´s well drawn and well animated. You really got the best of what you had in hand. Congratulations.
Well, don´t you think that this story will eventually happen in real life? Maybe one day we could actually see "Artist brains" in a real exhibition... I´m afraid it´s only a matter of time... It´s a stupid world indeed...

Score: 7

"It´s really nice."

submission: nosenseStatic

date: October 5, 2007

Try to work a bit on the walking cycle, it looked a little bit ankward.
Anyway, I´d like to see more of this.

Score: 8

"Just for giggles!"

submission: Climate changes

date: October 5, 2007

The animation is superb, and the sounds (all made with the mouth and some edited later.) are really funny. It has a little eco message and it´s suitable for ALL AUDIENCES!!!
This is no small feat, really...

Score: 5

"¡¡¡EL PAYASHO!!! (¡el payasho...!)"

submission: TSM Presents: FUCK you

date: October 1, 2007

Hmmm... this is suspiciouly similar to "La Hora Chanante"´s transition eyecatches... Also, the music is the same... hmmm... HMMMMM...

NOTE: "La Hora Chanante" is a spanish humour show broadcasted in the Paramount Comedy channel. Kinda spanish "Monty Python´s Flying Circus".